Luke Yasenha Jutsu registry

Special Jounin Posts : 55 Join date : 2015-12-02

Special Jounin: 6D(20 Total)

Stat points: E-C0 [5] to speed, E-D2 [3] to strength and E-D1 [2] to reaction time

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Name: Shadow Style: Succubus Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Shadow
Range: Short
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: eight posts (permanent if special criteria is met)
Cooldown: eight posts (none if special criteria is met)
Description: This jutsu is simple, yet powerful as its the "evil" version of the cannon sexy jutsu, where the caster will be changed into the opposite gender (Luke into Fauna, his female self in this case). This isn't a illusion, but a physical change into the opposite gender, giving them everything that gender would have. For Male-to-Female, if they become pregnant while in this form, the jutsu will automatically lock them in that body until they have given birth or permanent if a third party messes with the jutsu with any other jutsu of equal or higher strength. The user gains the ability to gain cosmetic bat wings and a tail, which, however physical, are only cosmetic in appearance, but provide why the jutsu is called what it is. Takes 20 chakra to use plus 15 per post unless deactivated before hitting the max post use.

Name: Shadow Style: Doppelgänger Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seals: Rat -> Tiger -> Snake
Duration: one post
Cooldown: 5 post cool down
Description: Another simple yet powerful technique; This uses Luke's personal shadow to form it into a 2D shade of Luke to absorb any attack of equal or lower strength. The shadow then changes from a 2D form into a fully 3D shade of whoever attacked before firing the jutsu back at the target at the strength the jutsu was cast at, but faster due to not having to use hand seals to fire the jutsu back. Requires 25 Chakra to use.

Name: Shadow Style: Wall of the Dammed Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat -> Ram
Duration: 1 to 3 posts
Cooldown: 3 post cool down
Description: Luke, after performing the hand seals; collects a large amount of shadows and darkness from the nearby area and forms them into a large wall of solid darkness that can block incoming medium to long range jutsu from equal rank and below. Requires 15 charka to use and 10 chakra every post.

Summoning Contract:

Animal/Plant Type: Vampire Bat
Elemental Affinity: Fire
Specialization: Flight
Summon Type: Animal (Large)

Rank: A

Description: Kōmori (Bat) is a giant vampire bat, equal in size with a small house. He has large, sensitive bat ears that he uses for echolocation to detect prey or incoming enemies; however they are so sensitive that normal talking to Kōmori is like shouting at him, so he normal asks people to speak gently or in whispers as he prefers not to get a headache from all the talking people do. He has a furry back, covered in black fur and large bat wings with black scales covering them to make them more resistant to damage. He also wears a long, red silk rope around his neck to allow Luke or another passager to hold on; however he very much dislikes the ribbon as he finds it "too girly" for his tastes, however, he understands Luke's desire to not accidentally choke him with a regular rope instead and went with something softer so its was more comfortable. He's quite gruff, especially if he's summoned during his nap till midnight, which tends to be the case a lot of the time, so he ends up acting like he got out the wrong side of bed; grumpy, irritable and serious. He does enjoy drinking blood and normally does it to cheer himself up after being summoned.

General appearance:

Summoning Process: Luke first has to summon the summoning scroll from a smaller scroll he keep with him. He then throws it into the air, where it floats while the roll of the scroll comes out and swirls around him, covered in various kanji; the main one being a set of kanji (吸血コウモリ) that translate to "vampire bat" within a arcane sealing circle, made of smaller kanji. Luke then presses his blood against the seal before it bursts into a cloud of white smoke before revealing Kōmori.

Jutsu:

Name: Fire Style: Red Moon Blast jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: Medium to Long range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: one post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Kōmori charges up the flames inside his mouth into a ball shape, before firing it as a think, wide beam of fire, able to cause wide-scale destruction and cause burns of varying intensity, depending on how much the person was caught in the attack and what Rank they are and if they used any jutsus to counter it. Consumes 20 chakra to use.

Drawbacks: Despite his speed, flight and offensive abilities; He's not very durable as a well timed shot from a C to B Rank Jutsu can burn through his fur or his light defences, leaving him vulnerable if he was hit. Also, he doesn't like loud sounds as they throw him off and he doesn't like working in the day as it hurts his eyes which are naturally adjusted to the darkness.

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Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27

Quote :: Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten charka to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training).

This MUST have a cooldown. You can leave the Duration as / or make it 1 post, it means basically the same thing, but this must have a cooldown. Because this is scaling, you need to know that it's going to cost 1 token per rank that it covers (1D, 1C, 1B, 1A), or else you'll need to just wait and train it for the A-rank WC. Which isn't much. Beyond that, set a speed for the movement between the shadows.

Quote :: Name: Embodiment of Darkness Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive/Denfensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short to medium range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Indefinitely until charka runs our or deactivated
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: This is Luke's go to jutsu when using his shadow style; Luke can manifest either eight tentacles (four on each side) or four, large additional shadow arms that float with two floating either side of his shoulders and two floating just under his own arms, his tentacles can be used to wrap around opponents, used as whips or like ropes for other uses while the arms can grab and attack using strong punches. the additional tentacles/arms can be cut off like regular body parts, although their skin is armored with dragon-like scales, they can be cut through, given a fast and hard cut to it, Although Luke can reform them but not instantly. each arm/tentacle lasts for about six posts, Reform takes two posts per part cut off/destroyed. Takes ten charka to manifest, five to repair plus five each post active and if not enough charka is available, the shadow arms/tentacles will fade away by themselves.

In the Duration, you need to format it as -X chakra per post, where X is the drain amount. D-rank Drain is -5 chakra per post. You need to give the defensive power of this jutsu, as well what offensive boosts it offers. The cooldown needs to either be higher, or changed to be Duration + X ; which is the normal cooldown format for jutsu with a chakra drain duration. The X can be 3 or higher for this jutsu.

Quote :: Name: Shadow Strike Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Unlimited until deactivation or broken
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Using his shadows, he coats his blade in the shadows and forms them into a black steel that fits from the end of his blade and extents it to three times its size from two feet to six. It coats the bottom as well, giving the whole blade a black gloss finish like obsidian, yet as strong as the steel the blade is made from. However, it can be broken by a strong enough strike or by Jutsus of B-Rank and above. Its only purpose is to increase the length of Luke's blade and has no other abilities besides that. Requires 10 charka to form.

This would actually just be basic Kenjutsu, since all it does is affect the blade. You won't get that much length change from a D-rank; more like 1ft (.3m) addition versus tripling. Otherwise, it's fine.

So you know for later, if it's channeled through the blade only, it's straight Kenjutsu. If it effects the body/AoE, then it needs Kenjutsu || Ninjutsu for specialty.

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Quote :: Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 1 post
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten charka to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training). While, depending on the distance, you can walk or run to the shadow your looking for; once you find a shadow, it pulls you up and out in a few seconds, allowing the user to travel vast distances in seemingly little time at all.

I need an actual, physical speed. You're going to need more of a cooldown; depending on the speed you give me, I can tell you what kind of cooldown you need.

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Special Jounin: 7D, 4C, 1B (20 Total)

Stat points: 5 to speed, 3 to strength and 2 to reaction time

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Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 1 post
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten charka to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training). While, depending on the distance, you can walk or run to the shadow your looking for; once you find a shadow, it pulls you up and out in a few seconds, allowing the user to travel vast distances in seemingly little time at all.

Name: Embodiment of Darkness Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive/Denfensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short to medium range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -10 charka per post active (ends when deactivated or user doesn't have enough charka to sustain it)
Cooldown: Equal to the amount of posts active for.
Description: This is Luke's go to jutsu when using his shadow style; Luke can manifest either eight tentacles (four on each side) or four, large additional shadow arms that float with two floating either side of his shoulders and two floating just under his own arms, his tentacles can be used to wrap around opponents, used as whips or like ropes for other uses while the arms can grab and attack using strong punches (Strengh equal to C3-B in strength). the additional tentacles/arms can be cut off like regular body parts, although their skin is armored with dragon-like scales, giving a C2 in endurance, they can be cut through, given a fast and hard cut to it or by a jutsu at C-rank or above. Although Luke can reform them but not instantly. each arm/tentacle lasts for about six posts, Reform takes two posts per part cut off/destroyed. Takes ten charka to manifest, five to repair plus five each post active and if not enough charka is available, the shadow arms/tentacles will fade away by themselves.

At the MOST, you can boost by +1 tier at D-rank. You need to list the cooldown how I told you before. Duration + X, or else set a static cooldown, but if you set a static, it is going to be fairly long; at LEAST 5 posts.

Quote :: Name: Shadow Strike Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to B (D equal to one foot to B equal to 4 feet extention)
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Unlimited until deactivation or broken
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Using his shadows, he coats his blade in the shadows and forms them into a black steel that fits from the end of his blade and extents it to three times its size from two feet to six. It coats the bottom as well, giving the whole blade a black gloss finish like obsidian, yet as strong as the steel the blade is made from. However, it can be broken by a strong enough strike or by Jutsus of B-Rank and above. Its only purpose is to increase the length of Luke's blade and has no other abilities besides that. Requires 10 charka to form.

You made none of the changes I asked for here. See above, because this is scaling, it going to cost 1 token for each rank (1D, 1C, 1B)

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Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27

Quote :: Name: Substitution Jutsu (Kawarimi no Jutsu - 変わり身の術)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: /
Specialty: /
Duration: /
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: With this technique, users replace their own body with some other object, generally with a block of wood, the moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to attack or flee from the battlefield. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. It's a basic ninjutsu even taught at the Academy, but it's a useful art that can be applied in variety of situations, as it allows for a swift getaway from danger.

I must have missed this yesterday. Approved.

Quote :: Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten chakra to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training). While within the shadow dimension, you can move at 12m/s; once you find a shadow, it pulls you up and out in a few seconds, allowing the user to travel vast distances in seemingly little time at all.

Approved.

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Special Jounin: 6D(20 Total)

Stat points: 5 to speed, 3 to strength and 2 to reaction time

Name: Substitution Jutsu (Kawarimi no Jutsu - 変わり身の術)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: /
Specialty: /
Duration: /
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: With this technique, users replace their own body with some other object, generally with a block of wood, the moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to attack or flee from the battlefield. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. It's a basic ninjutsu even taught at the Academy, but it's a useful art that can be applied in variety of situations, as it allows for a swift getaway from danger.

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Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten chakra to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training). While within the shadow dimension, you can move at 12m/s; once you find a shadow, it pulls you up and out in a few seconds, allowing the user to travel vast distances in seemingly little time at all.

Name: Embodiment of Darkness Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive/Denfensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short to medium range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -10 chakra per post active (ends when deactivated or user doesn't have enough charka to sustain it)
Cooldown: Six posts cool down
Description: This is Luke's go to jutsu when using his shadow style; Luke can manifest either eight tentacles (four on each side) or four, large additional shadow arms that float with two floating either side of his shoulders and two floating just under his own arms, his tentacles can be used to wrap around opponents, used as whips or like ropes for other uses while the arms can grab and attack using strong punches (Strength equal to D3 in strength). the additional tentacles/arms can be cut off like regular body parts, although their skin is armoured with dragon-like scales, giving a D3 in endurance, they can be cut through, given a fast and hard cut to it or by a jutsu at C-rank or above. Although Luke can reform them but not instantly. each arm/tentacle lasts for about six posts, Reform takes two posts per part cut off/destroyed. Takes ten chakra to manifest, five to repair plus ten each post active and if not enough chakra is available, the shadow arms/tentacles will fade away by themselves.

Approved.

Quote :: Name: Masamune of the Dark God Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Unlimited until deactivation or broken
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Using his shadows, he coats his blade in the shadows and forms them into a black steel that fits from the end of his blade and extents it to three times its size from two feet to six. It coats the bottom as well, giving the whole blade a black gloss finish like obsidian, yet as strong as the steel the blade is made from. However, it can be broken by a strong enough strike or by Jutsus of B-Rank and above. Its only purpose is to increase the length of Luke's blade and has no other abilities besides that. Requires 10 chakra to form.

Again, read the chakra and jutsu guidelines. We have a set chakra cost for each rank of jutsu. B-rank is base 15. You can say a jutsu costs above base; that's a common way to get strong jutsu approved at a lower rank when they skirt the line between ranks (Say a jutsu that would be stupidly powerful at A-rank with normal chakra cost would get approved if you bump it from 25 to 40 chakra to use, sometimes). Otherwise, this would be fine.

Quote :: Name: Secret Sword: Moon Shadow (Hiken: Tsukikage - 秘剣・月影)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user rushes to their opponent with great speed before leaping towards and attacking them with a vertical sword strike, leaving a trace of afterimage in the process.

Name: Infinite Slash Combo (Surasshu no mugen konbo - スラッシュの無限コンボ)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Infinite Slash Combo (スラッシュの無限コンボ, Surasshu no mugen konbo) is an attack where the user dashes to the opponent at a blinding speed and slashes at them with a blade quickly. Depending on how much the user infuses their chakra into the attack, more than one slash can be done and the distance can increase.

Approved.

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27

This, This is your best friend. I know it's a bit complicated, because of the sheer volume of information (and the lack of some, but that's on another admin who keeps being lazy and not finishing his sections. ee;;), but it does give you what you need to know.

https://ninjaballad.rpg-board.net/t74-stat-system

Seriously. Read it. It does tell you what you need to know about a lot of this.

Quote :: Stat points: 5 to speed, 3 to strength and 2 to reaction time

5 points in speed would be:

E-C0 [5]

3 points strength:

E-D2 [3]

2 to reaction time:

E-D1 [2]

So what I need you to do is, repost the stat request as follows

E-C0 [5]
E-D2 [3]
E-D1 [2]

All stat requests are formatted that way. This is why the number of tiers is counted in the first post, so that it's easier to figure out how many you're spending to get to each point. It takes twenty points to hit SS3 in one stat.

Special Jounin Posts : 55 Join date : 2015-12-02

bumping for approval

Special Jounin Posts : 55 Join date : 2015-12-02

applying for: Ninjutsu upgrade from D to B rank
word count: 3,542
link to training: https://ninjaballad.rpg-board.net/t1080-ninjutsu-training-private#4298

Special Jounin Posts : 55 Join date : 2015-12-02

bumping~

Lt Colonel Posts : 330 Join date : 2015-04-23

Oookay, we seem to have some issues with the word counts here. You're stating you trained Ninjutsu from D rank to B rank and stated your word count at 3,542 words. As per our guidelines you are way off of the required words:

D-C 2,000 words
C-B 3,000 words

You need a total of 5,000 words to take your Ninjutsu from D to B rank. Training Guidelines Here.

Furthermore; it has been brought to my attention that your character approval was revoked until specific changes have been made to your character app. Until your character is reapproved you cannot RP, do missions, or do any more training: nor will the rest of your stuff be modded until the character issue is fixed.

Special Jounin Posts : 55 Join date : 2015-12-02

ok, I don't mind if its just from D-C rank, but I made the changes and bumped my app, no one has looked at it since then, that isn't fair

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