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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Tue May 12, 2015 5:40 pm

Ban, use the right template, please. @@

http://ninjaballad.forumotion.com/t66-jutsu-and-chakra-rules

If you see a sticky in an area, it's a really good idea to read it. We use templates for a reason. <3

I would also suggest checking out our existing clones jutsu, so you can get an idea of how they're formatted, what they're allowed to do/be at existing ranks, and so that you understand how the chakra problem is dealt with in the case of Kage Bushin and enhanced Kage Bushin.


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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Mon May 25, 2015 3:56 pm

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Name: Create Light
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: 50 feet of light
Specialty: Creates a source of light
Duration: 8 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user is able to create a ball of light that is approximately the equivalent of two candles per rank of the user. As with most jutsu's, it can be canceled at any time and the user can increase or decrease the light intensity by thought. The light can remain stationary or follow him.

Type: Supplementary
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration cannot be longer than the cooldown. In this case, it's going to be a duration chakra drain, meaning it's going to read as '-5 chakra per post', and the cooldown will have to be 'Duration + 2". Remember, cooldown must be at LEAST 1.5x the duration of the jutsu, or else listed as Duration + X where x=2 or more.


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Name: Light Release: Shuriken Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: the range and use of a normal shuriken
Specialty: Creates light shuriken
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Creates shuriken out of the natural light of the world and throws it at the opponent. This shuriken is made of chakra but with the brightness of condensed light and because of this cuts not burns. Because of the brightness of the shuriken, it is hard to look at and therefore much harder to dodge.

Type: Offensive
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
You state how it damages in the description, not in the range. If this only cuts, then list how deeply this cuts. I don't care how deeply you can cut with a 'normal' iron or steel shuriken, because this is made of chakra it's not going to be able to cut as deep because it's going to lack the weight of a metal shuriken and when thrown won't be able to do the same level of damage overall. If anything, the brightness of this weapon would make it easier to dodge, unless you're saying it's so bright that it's blinding? In which case, say that; and tell us what range of ranks this is effective against. A C-rank jutsu isn't going to blind an S-rank ninja afterall. How many shuriken are created at a time using this?


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Name: Holographic Image Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range:
Specialty: creates a light clone
Duration: 8 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user creates a clone out of light, but its a rather interesting clone. This clone does not have any physical qualities, however when looked through a doujutsu it is perceived as a Kage Bunshin. An excellent deception skill, and when attacked bursts into a blinding light making the person blind for a two posts.

Type: Supplementary
Where is your range?
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts
Doujutsu see a Kage Bushin as the user itself, not as a clone; that's the whole point and reason why Kage Bushin is so powerful in the series. There are no doujutsu here, so that's basically a moot point. If you want some way of saying that it can't be told from a Kage Bushin, then it can't have an elemental affinity, cause any elemental affinity changes the way the clone looks and responds, and anyone with a high enough REA stat will be able to notice the chakra aura being wrong. As for the blinding effect, that's totally fine, I just need to know up to what rank of enemy it works on.


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Name: Light release: Beam
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: 50 feet of light
Specialty: Creates a source of light
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: After a set of handseals, the user gathers chakra in his hands and releases it in the form of a laser blast of light. Of course, depending on the amount of chakra put in this can be more or less powerful, but on average it matches other C-rank jutsu's like great fire ball.

Type: Offensive
Range: Needs to be in meters. I now we mix metric and imperial pretty hard, but jutsu are kept to metric. This is roughly 15 meters, and that's fine. Just say it as 15 meters.
Specialty: Ninjutsu
How wide is this beam? How badly does it actually burn? Does it cause any physical (concussive) damage (Bruising, cracked bones, etc)?


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Name: Light release: Real Holographic Shuriken Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range:
Specialty: Projectiles
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: using concepts of the holographic skill the user sends off one light shuriken and it multiplies into many shuriken. However, when looked at through the eyes of a doujutsu it is seen as normal chakra as if it were genjutsu. On top of this, to appearance of a normal eye it seems translucent and not fake. However each shuriken accounts for being equal to a Light Release: Light Shuriken.

Type: Offensive
Where is your range?
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Again, how many shuriken? Again, no doujutsu. Translucent would look extremely fake in relation to a shuriken.


How are these all canon? Did you get these from the fan wiki or some other source?

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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Mon May 25, 2015 4:55 pm

Okay, I'm going to break down the template for you, as you still seem to be having a bit of a problem
following it.


Name: The name of your jutsu, obviously
Canon/Custom: Is this a custom or canon jutsu?
Rank: What rank is this jutsu? Acceptable ranks are D-SS
Type: Is this a offensive, defensive, or supplementary jutsu? Offensive jutsu are generally directly attacking your opponent, defensive jutsu protect from attacks, and supplementary jutsu are generally support jutsu, such as waterwalking or tree climbing.A jutsu can fall into more than one type
Element: What element is your technique
Range: Range is broken down into three section, Close (0-5m), Mid (5m-10m), or Far (10m+)
Specialty: What specializations are required to perform this jutsu? Jutsu can require more than one, but not always.
Duration: How long does your jutsu last? Keep in mind, if the jutsu lasts for more than one posts, it will usually require a chakra drain to maintain it.
Cooldown: How long must you wait before you can use this jutsu again? Keep in mind, durations cannot be longer than cooldowns. A proper cooldown is usually 1.5x to 2x the duration of a jutsu, sometime more depending on the strength of the jutsu. For example, a jutsu with a duration of five posts will usually require a cooldown of seven to ten posts. Also, please note that cooldowns begin AFTER the jutsu's duration is completed.
Description: What exactly does your jutsu do? Please, be as descriptive as possible. The more detail you add, the easier staff can moderate your jutsu.

Now, with that being said, I'm going to break down your jutsu and tell you exactly what you need for each.




Name: Create Light
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: 50 feet of light
Specialty: Creates a source of light
Duration: 8 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user is able to create a ball of light that is approximately the equivalent of two candles per rank of the user. As with most jutsu's, it can be canceled at any time and the user can increase or decrease the light intensity by thought. The light can remain stationary or follow him.


You technically do not need a jutsu to create light, but if you wish to keep this, then you'll need to change a few things. First off, given than you're creating more light per rank, this jutsu needs to be scaled in ranking, meaning it would need to be ranked as D - X, with X being the whatever rank you want to stop this jutsu. Granted, two candles isnt alot of light.

Also, how is this a canon jutsu? I don't remember light release ever being in the series. Did you get this from the Fanon wiki? If so, then it would be custom, not canon, as those jutsu were written by other people.

In addition, please adjust your template to match the requirements I posted above.

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Name: Light Release: Shuriken Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: the range and use of a normal shuriken
Specialty: Creates light shuriken
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Creates shuriken out of the natural light of the world and throws it at the opponent. This shuriken is made of chakra but with the brightness of condensed light and because of this cuts not burns. Because of the brightness of the shuriken, it is hard to look at and therefore much harder to dodge.


Even for a C rank jutsu, light release is not that bright. The brightness of something would not alter someone's ability to dodge a shuriken unless there was no way for them to dodge it all.

Also, you have your effects reversed. At this low ranking, a light release tech would burn more than it cuts.
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Name: Holographic Image Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range:
Specialty: creates a light clone
Duration: 8 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user creates a clone out of light, but its a rather interesting clone. This clone does not have any physical qualities, however when looked through a doujutsu it is perceived as a Kage Bunshin. An excellent deception skill, and when attacked bursts into a blinding light making the person blind for a two posts.


I have a light clone technique that I'll allow you to use.

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Name: Light release: Beam
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: 50 feet of light
Specialty: Creates a source of light
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: After a set of handseals, the user gathers chakra in his hands and releases it in the form of a laser blast of light. Of course, depending on the amount of chakra put in this can be more or less powerful, but on average it matches other C-rank jutsu's like great fire ball.


If this technique varies in damage, then you need to make it a scaling rank. Also, the damage that this technique can do need to be detailed.

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Name: Light release: Real Holographic Shuriken Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range:
Specialty: Projectiles
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: using concepts of the holographic skill the user sends off one light shuriken and it multiplies into many shuriken. However, when looked at through the eyes of a doujutsu it is seen as normal chakra as if it were genjutsu. On top of this, to appearance of a normal eye it seems translucent and not fake. However each shuriken accounts for being equal to a Light Release: Light Shuriken.


Okay, firstly you cannot dictate the effects of a doujutsu like this, as not all doujutsu do the same thing. You can attempt to do so versus a normal eye, but keep in mind that someone with high enough REA (which covers perception) would be able to tell that these are not real shuriken.

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Name: Light release: Angel Wings Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: 3 meters
Specialty: Flight, Versatility in battle
Duration: 8 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user gathers chakra into their back as a pair of angelic wings spring forth. These wings, light sheathed in chakra, are controlled with pure chakra control. Because of this it is almost impossible for someone of lesser rank than Lieutenant to use any other jutsu's with it. However, this gives the wings the ability to be used for flight, blocking taijutsu attacks, and striking opponents.


I have a wings of light skill that I will allow you to use. But keep in mind for future references, powered flight is only allowed at A rank and above.
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Name: Light release: Shining Angel Blast Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range:
Specialty: Creates a minion to control in battle
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user sends forth a great deal of light towards the opponent, taking in a green tint to it as it forms the figure of an angellic figure with four large wings and a blade in its hand. The angel is used like a puppet and can attack using its blade and wings. However, for a great burst of damage the angel can run into the target, exploding in a blast of light.


This seems like an upgraded version of Light clone, with the added bonus of being able to fly. Unfortunately, the creation cannot use a sword unless you yourself possess kenjutsu. In addition, the damage this skill can do needs to be detailed.

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Name: Light release: Concentrate
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: Blast reaches up to 100 feet. Light is gathered from 30 feet
Specialty: Ranged light attack
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user gathers all the light in a 30 foot radius(per rank) and focuses into a ball of light in front of his palm. This causes an intense flash of light as suddenly all the light in that area comes from the one point. Then, the user releases the light in a laser beam of destructive power. This can be done instantly after it is gathered, or the light can be held for up to a few seconds. As the user is constantly draining light from his surroundings, the light gets more powerful per second(and as does the laser) so if held for more than 2 seconds(per rank) it will explode and backfire on the user.

Again, if you're gathering more light per ranking, then you need to make this jutsu scaling in rank (D-A). In addition, while yes, time continues to flow in battle, actual seconds is debatable while in combat. If you're going to 'charge' a skill in combat, then you need to covert the time into posts. If you're going to make this skill do more damage you're going to need more charge time.


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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Mon Jun 08, 2015 11:13 pm

Substitution, Body Flicker, Clone, and Transformation don't need to be apped; you start with those. Either way, approved.

You have the following specs at the following levels:

Nin (D)
Gen (D)
Tai (D)
Fuuin (B)


You CANNOT have Ninjutsu above C-rank with D-Rank Ninjutsu. Remove any and all Ninjutsu that are above C-rank. Same goes for Gen and Tai.


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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Mon Jun 08, 2015 11:59 pm

If I didn't say it was approved, then it's not approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Tue Jun 09, 2015 7:54 am

There's nothing that needs to be changed right now. You don't have the spec rank to use those jutsu. Move the jutsu that ARE approved to your jutsu list, and either throw the rest under a spoiler tag for later and app different jutsu that you can use, or go train your Ninjutsu spec up to at least LEAST B-rank. That's the only way you're going to get to use those other jutsu. I'm pretty sure all of those light techs are the ones that have already been modded as well, before either of us noticed that you lacked the Ninjutsu rank to use them.

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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Wed Jun 10, 2015 11:35 pm

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Name: Light release: Real Holographic Shuriken Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: n/a
Specialty: Projectiles
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: using concepts of the holographic skill the user sends off one light shuriken and it multiplies into many shuriken. However, when looked at through the human eye it is seen as normal shuriken. However each shuriken accounts for being equal to a Light Release: Light Shuriken. An opponent with a high enough REA stat will be able to tell that these are not real shuriken.

Needs a range. How far can the shuriken travel before it falls apart, basically.

Type: Offensive.
Specialty: Ninjutsu

If this is only going to damage like a normal Shuriken, then it's going to be C-Rank, same as the rest of the elemental shuriken.

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Name: Light release: Shining Angel Blast Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range:
Specialty: Creates a minion to control in battle
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user sends forth a great deal of light towards the opponent, taking in a green tint to it as it forms the figure of an angelic figure with four large wings. The angel is used like a puppet and can attack using its wings, taijutsu and light jutsu that the user posses. However, for a great burst of damage the angel can run into the target, exploding in a blast of light. The burst causes A rank damage applies for the light explosion and 3rd degree burns are inflicted on the opponent if they are caught in the blast.

Type: Offensive || Supplementary
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration - x chakra per post (A-rank chakra maintenance base is 20)
Cooldown: Duration + x (where x is at least 5 in this case)

Is this a solid manifestation? What's the range? How strong is it when using physical attacks? What's the size of the manifestation overall? How much of the body is affected by the burn? How fast does this thing move?

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Name: Light release: Concentrate
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D - A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Range: Blast reaches up to 100 feet. Light is gathered from 30 feet
Specialty: Ranged light attack
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user gathers all the light in a 30 foot radius(per rank) and focuses into a ball of light in front of his palm. This causes an intense flash of light as suddenly all the light in that area comes from the one point. Then, the user releases the light in a laser beam of destructive power. This can be done instantly after it is gathered, or the light can be held for up to a few seconds. As the user is constantly draining light from his surroundings, the light gets more powerful for every turn that passes(and as does the laser) so if held for more than 2 posts(per rank) it will explode and backfire on the user.

Type: Offensive
Range: Use meters, please.
Specialty: Ninjutsu

30 feet per rank? As in, for every rank above D it gathers from an additional 30 feet area? If the stated duration is 1 post, then the just can only last one post.

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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Fri Jun 12, 2015 2:57 am

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Name: Light release: Real Holographic Shuriken Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: using concepts of the holographic skill the user sends off one light shuriken and it multiplies into many shuriken. However, when looked at through the human eye it is seen as normal shuriken. However each shuriken accounts for being equal to a Light Release: Light Shuriken. An opponent with a high enough REA stat will be able to tell that these are not real shuriken.

Lat thing. How many shuriken are you making with this jutsu?

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Name: Light release: Shining Angel Blast Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive|| Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: 50 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration:
Cool down: Duration + 5 posts
Description: The user sends forth a great deal of light towards the opponent, taking in a green tint to it as it forms the figure of an angelic figure with a tangible body with four large wings. The body cannot be affected by taijutsu attacks due to its nature. Ninjutsu can affect it but to kill it, the user must be incapacitated or forced to dissolve it with genjutsu. It is nine feet in height, and slender in form with a majestic robe about its frame. The angel is capable of acting on its own and can attack using its wings, taijutsu and any light jutsu that the user posses. It is equally strong and fast as the user when using physical attacks. As its own ability, for a great burst of damage the angel can run into the target, same speed the user is able to move at, and explodes in a blast of light. The burst causes A rank concussive damage for the light explosion and 3rd degree burns are inflicted on the opponent if they are caught in the blast. If they are caught in the blast then the exposed areas on their body will be affected. The range of the blast is 100 meters.

Ooookay. This is better. My only issue is the range of the blast; 100 meters even at A-rank is high. Cut it in half, and this will be approvable.


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Name: Light release: Concentrate
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D - A
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: Blast reaches up to 100 meters. Light is gathered from 30 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user gathers all the light in a 30 meter radius per rank, in other words, for every rank above D it gathers from an additional 30 meter area. After the light has been gathered, it focuses into a ball of light in front of his palm. This causes an intense flash of light as suddenly all the light in that area comes from the one point. Then, the user releases the light in a laser beam that is 10 meters in diameter of destructive power. The light beam can cause concussive burning damage. Which if hits can easily break an opponent's bones for internal damage and also causes 3rd degree burns to exposed areas of the skin.

Yeah no. You're not going to be able to gather power from a larger area than this covers. The range itself is totally wrong. If this was A rank ONLY, you MIGHT be able to get a skillshot/straight line blast that reaches 100 meters, but not at D/C/B rank. Because this scales, it's going to cut the range significantly. You're looking at more like 20 meters total for this because of the scaling nature of it.


Also, these aren't canon techs. These are custom. Light release isn't series canon; it's a fan-made release. Therefore, no light release tech is canon.

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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Fri Jun 12, 2015 3:50 am

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Name: Light release: Real Holographic Shuriken Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: using concepts of the holographic skill the user sends off one light shuriken and it multiplies into fifty shuriken. However, when looked at through the human eye it is seen as normal shuriken.  However each shuriken accounts for being equal to a Light Release: Light Shuriken. An opponent with a high enough REA stat will be able to tell that these are not real shuriken.

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Name: Light release: Shining Angel Blast Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive|| Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: 50 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration:
Cool down: Duration + 5 posts
Description: The user sends forth a great deal of light towards the opponent, taking in a green tint to it as it forms the figure of an angelic figure with a tangible body with four large wings. The body cannot be affected by taijutsu attacks due to its nature. Ninjutsu can affect it but to kill it, the user must be incapacitated or forced to dissolve it with genjutsu. It is nine feet in height, and slender in form with a majestic robe about its frame. The angel is capable of acting on its own and can attack using its wings, taijutsu and any light jutsu that the user posses. It is equally strong and fast as the user when using physical attacks. As its own ability, for a great burst of damage the angel can run into the target, same speed the user is able to move at, and explodes in a blast of light. The burst causes A rank concussive damage for the light explosion and 3rd degree burns are inflicted on the opponent if they are caught in the blast. If they are caught in the blast then the exposed areas on their body will be affected. The range of the blast is 50 meters.
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Name: Light release: Concentrate
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: Blast reaches up to 70 meters.
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user gathers light around them, it focuses into a ball of light in front of his palm. This causes an intense shot of light as suddenly all the light in that area comes from the one point. Then, the user releases the light in a laser beam shot that is 10 meters in diameter of destructive power. The light beam shot can cause concussive burning damage. Which if hits can easily break an opponent's bones for internal damage and also causes 3rd degree burns to exposed areas of the skin.

You're not getting 50 shuriken at C-rank. You'll get 6 at most.

Shining Angel Blast Skill approved.

You're not firing a 10 meter wide beam 70 meters. In context, that's a beam that nearly 45 feet wide flying 3/4ths the length of a football field. Not happening. 3 meters wide sure, but not 10 meters.

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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Fri Jun 12, 2015 4:03 am

Bankai wrote:
Name: Light release: Real Holographic Shuriken Skill
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: using concepts of the holographic skill the user sends off one light shuriken and it multiplies into six shuriken. However, when looked at through the human eye it is seen as normal shuriken.  However each shuriken accounts for being equal to a Light Release: Light Shuriken. An opponent with a high enough REA stat will be able to tell that these are not real shuriken.
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Name: Light release: Concentrate
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: Blast reaches up to 70 meters.
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user gathers light around them, it focuses into a ball of light in front of his palm. This causes an intense shot of light as suddenly all the light in that area comes from the one point. Then, the user releases the light in a laser beam shot that is 3 meters in diameter of destructive power. The light beam shot can cause concussive burning damage. Which if hits can easily break an opponent's bones for internal damage and also causes 3rd degree burns to exposed areas of the skin.


Shuriken skill and Concentrate approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Tue Jun 30, 2015 10:12 pm

Bankai wrote:
Massive taijutsu training
http://ninjaballad.forumotion.com/t732-taijutsu-training-closed
Gains: 10, 341 words

Rp link: http://ninjaballad.forumotion.com/t631p15-having-a-meeting-of-sorts-open-to-senri
Gains: 1,765 words

total word gain: 12, 106 words

I will be using 7,700 words to raise my taijutsu stat from D to A which leaves 4,406 words remain.
i will use the rest of words to raise my speed and reaction stat from C2 to B. which will cost me 4500 words. im a little short in words but i doubt i will be denied this for just a 100 words. if its an issue let me know and i will whip up a fast 100 words.

Rp Link: http://ninjaballad.forumotion.com/t741-hidden-from-all-eyes-closed-rp#2802
Gains: 3,180 words
Raising my Genjutsu Stat from D to B

Okay, we have some numbers issues here. Taijutsu from D – A is a total of 9,000 words, not 7,700. Please recalculate your numbers for your trainings.

From the Spec Guideline wrote:

Training specialties is super simple. So long as you have the slot to train a specialty, you use the following system:

D-Rank: 2,000 words + 1000 Ryo with teacher OR 3,000 words + 2000 ryo without one
D-C 2,000 words
C-B 3,000 words
B-A 4,000 words
A-S 6,500 words
S-SS 8,000 words

This is for ALL Specialties.

To raise your Reaction and Speed from C-2 to B is only 2,700 words combined for both stats.

From the Stats Guideline wrote:

C2 - C3: 600 words
C3 - B: 750 words

Genjutsu D – B would cost you 5,000 words.

Also, for a side note; we will not even let 100 words slide. You must have all the required words needed for a training to be approved.

Now, please adjust your number's, double check that everything is fixed, and bump this topic again.

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PostSubject: Re: Bankai's [jutsu reg]   Mon Jul 06, 2015 1:14 am

Okay, I'm confused. C2-A0 is 6200 words by my count. C2-B3 is 4900. Unless I'm missing something, your numbers are really off.


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