Misaki Bankai [item reg]

5 flash bombs
5 scrolls
and
1 D ranked tag 150 ryo
1 C 450 ryo
1 B 750 ryo
1 A 1150 ryo
1 S 1650 ryo
in barrier tags

I apologize for the wait, I didn't see that this was bumped.

Okay, the burn size is way too big for an A rank jutsu. There's no way you can burn someone's entire body with anything of that rank. Also, how deep does this burn penetrate into the skin? As well as what rank of a burn: 1st degree, 2nd degree, 3rd degree?

I'd also like to note in case it hasn't been done yet that you'll need Taijutsu of A rank (since the weapon is A rank) before you can use this.

No need for an apology because I know you all are busy. As I told Karukaya since I was banned from the chat because I messaged either you or her about this gunbai to remind staff of it, I will be messaging staff via pm from now on with a limit of one message a day. It was an eye opener to me. I was really a pest and I apologize for it, I assure you it wont ever happen again.

Its clear that you all are not too sure by what I mean by my description of how the light attacks affect the body. Please watch this video for ten seconds or so from 6:50 or so. Notice how Ichigo's Getsuga Tenchou affects Grimjaw's body despite the size of Ichigo's technique. The scars themselves that are left on an opponent's body are the dimensions I described earlier, three inches wide ten feet wide. The thinness and length of the light attacks are better shown in this video here with Sephiroth vs Genesis at 3:32.

Just because something works in another anime doesn't mean it'll work here. And at the moment for an A rank attack you're not burning someone's entire body. You could at the most burn 50% of the body that's facing the attack, but you're not getting worse then a 2nd degree burn out of the attack.

Ah ok thats cool if your giving me 50% of the body thanks for that :). And ok about the 2nd degree. So that means I might of gotten 3rd degree burns if it was an S ranked weapon. That seems fair to me. Let me know if the description is ok now. And today I have been training my taijutsu up. I should be able to use the gunbai when this is approved.

Bankai wrote:

Enhancement 2: Enhancement 2: The Gunbai is durable enough to smash through materials like tree roots, rocks and metal. Bankai can also channel his light chakra to create one that he can release a searingly hot, or can dish out Blunt force Damage: Guaranteed broken bones/ribs, massive bruising, internal bleeding, dislocation of large joints (Shoulders, etc), amputation of smaller joins (fingers/toes, possibly elbows or ankles) with a range of ten meters with a swing of the fan. The attacks with just the Gunbai are all A ranked and again, normal jutsu damage applies since its an A ranked jutsu however if a light attack is used and it hits then they will receive 2nd degree burns to the exposed areas of their bodies. Being an A ranked weapon, giving A ranked attacks, armor an opponent may have that is under A rank would not hinder the attacks coming from this weapon. As for the area that is affected, the opponent is struck with an arch shaped beam of light. If the opponent is struck by the attack, they will be hit by a ten foot long three inch wide light beam. The same length and thickness of the beam will appear as a dark scar on the opponent's body based on battle conditions. Meaning that if the user attacks them from behind and they are six foot five inches in height, only up to 50% of their body will be hit by it and of course battle conditions would determine where the slashes end up. But they will always be the same size. Marks will be left on the opponent of the same size as the beams if it is not healed.
Chakra Cost: 25 chakra per attack released.
Range: 50 meters

Remove the reference of "Meaning that if the user attacks them from behind and they are six foot five inches in height". It does not matter how tall your opponent is you are only burning 50% of the body that is facing the attack. Please ensure that you add the the portion of their body being burned is only the portion "facing the attack".

Also, remove the "Range: 50 meters" at the bottom of your post or better explain this because it seems to have nothing to do with the numbers you've already mentioned.

made the changes.