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PostSubject: Shizuku    Tue May 12, 2015 1:11 am




Basics!
Name:
Age: 20
Birthdate: May 20th
Gender: female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Rank: Special Jounin

Village: Hana
Element(s): Suiton (Water) | Raiton (Lightning)
Specialties: Puppetry | Fuuinjutsu
Special Characteristics: n/a


Appearance!

Height:
5'8
Weight: 135-140 lb
Hair Color: Crimson
Eye Color: Crimson
General Description: Shizuku is a twenty year old woman that is known for her beauty. In her village, people have nicknamed her the Crimson Beauty, being a play on her various crimson features such as hair and eyes. She a pale woman with a slender and lengthy build. She is typically dressed in a two piece attire that is a body forming crimson and grey crop top that stops above her belly button. As for her bottoms she wears thigh cut shorts that are dark red and grey, although attached to her waist is a crimson fur dress like cloth that drags behind her in an elegant manner. Although her shorts are short, a majority of her legs are still concealed by dark grey boots with hills that stop at her mid thigh, revealing a strip of her thigh in between her boots and shorts.



About You!
Personality:
Selfish: Shizuku, although seems loyal to the village actually has very self centered motives. She often times thinks of herself more than her allies or those around her. She follows her villages orders, but only to a certain degree, if she feels that she can benefit from something she would approach that regardless of what the village wants. She see's herself as more important than those around her and wishes to better herself way before bettering the village, she simply see's the village as tool that she will wield until the blade has broken. By this, she means that the she will use the village until they hold no use to her any longer.

Blood Thirsty: Shizuku has an almost demented personality when it comes to combat, she often times claims that she has feed her blood lust enough and will ask enemies if they care to supply. She finds joy in fighting, she enjoys the heat of battle and finds a sense of euphoria in battle.

Playful: Shizuku is somewhat playful when in comes to talking to her allies and to her enemies. She will often times tease people or simply toy with her enemies in combat. She will claim to enemies she defeats quickly that they provided a boring game, viewing battle as a game. When not in battle though, Shizuku will tease her allies by making fun of something they've done or jokenly threaten them.

Intelligent: Shizuku, since being privately trained at a young age is extremely intelligent and is often times annoyed by those who are not as smart or claims people are stupid quite a bit. Shizuku spends a lot of her free time reading or testing her intelligence in puzzles. She finds it fun to test the brain. Her intelligence is sometimes refereed to by her allies as her strongest weapon.

History:

Birth: Shizuku was born into a small family on the outskirts of Hanagakure. Her parents were simple farms people who barely got by. Shizuku's birth was a healthy one and she was a prime example of health, although they found her eyes to be unusual. Her parents cared greatly about their new born and found her to be the most beautiful thing they had ever seen. They were both excited to raise their family together.

Infant: As a small child, Shizuku lived a fairly simple and normal life. She was hardly ever sick and was often times just a blessing to her parents. Her parents showed a strong amount of love and always made sure that Shizuku ate before they did, considering they were barely getting by though. They were worried if they would be able to support Shizuku as she grew older. They were already near debt with the land. As she reached the age of two, Shizuku's parents became more and more desperate as times became harder. They were not making enough money to get by and knew that Shizuku couldn't live like this. So, Shizuku's father made a deal with a sketchy scientist in the area. The deal was that the scientist would be allowed to run his private experiments on her father in exchange for large amounts of money. Shizuku's father saw this as a chance to have a good life for his daughter and took it. Sadly, Shizuku's father shortly grew ill from the expeirments, which lead to Shizuku's parents threatening to rat out the scientist. The scientist didn't like the idea of this and decided to take matters into his own hands, he couldn't risk his top secret experiments reaching the village and went to the village before they did and told them that Shizuku's parents were trading village information with another village for money. This caused the village to react by sending elite shinobi to the parent's house and secretly assassinating the mother and father. Shizuku was then taken by the village and placed into a secret program that was attempting to train children from a young age to become powerful shinobi.

Childhood: As Shizuku grew up under the custody of the village, she was told that her parents betrayed the village and fled the land, leaving Shizuku on her own when the village found her. Shizuku began studying the ways of the shinobi around the age of six. The village trained her along with five other children at the same age who they also kidnapped in order to produce perfect shinobi. Shizuku was considered by many a natural though, she quickly caught to the arts of jutsu and combat. Often times leading the group as a shinobi. The village noted this and saw promise in her, thus leading to more intense training for Shizuku. Shizuku was never enrolled in the academy like most kids and instead was taught privately with the other five children who slowly became her best friends. She saw them all as siblings. They would often times play games and spar for fun. Although, she didn't completely understand the past with her parents, she didn't care. She saw this as her home, this was all she knew. So her parents didn't affect her. She was happy with these other kids and formed bonds with each of them. They would work in perfect teams. She continued to train with the children up until the age of 14 when she was put under a test known as "A Right to Passage". Shizuku also appeared to have a natural skill with puppetry, she was noted for being the only child in the group who was capable of producing chakra threads.

A Right To Passage: At the age of 14, Shizuku and the other children who were part of the intense training regiment to create powerful shinobi were kidnapped in their sleep and awoke in a forest like area, acompanied by the elites of the village that trained them. Weapons were thrown before them and they were informed that they all had to fight to the death. Shizuku naturally didn't believe the elites and also believed that none of the others would want to fight one another, until another child grabbed a dagger in front of him and turned to Shizuku charging with the blade. At this moment, Shizuku's eyes changed. She became, heartless almost. She couldn't believe that someone she saw as a brother would charge at her after simply being told too. She realized that this is what it meant to be a ninja, even your allies are your enemies. With tears rushing down her face, she defended herself through out the night as the group fought against one another. Killing one another as the elites of the village watched from afar. As their bodies fell like dominoes, Shizuku was the last one standing. Blood patched on her face and clothing, with weapons floating around her attached to her chakra threads. When the test was done, an elite said; "Just as expected." The village knew that Shizuku was the strongest in the group and the only thing they needed to do to make her a killing machine was to strip away her emotions, which they did by pushing her to slaughter people she held dear. After the right to passage, Shizuku was announced a Chuunin of the village and would begin doing missions for the village.

Chuunin: As a chuunin, Shizuku became a lot colder and independt. She focused on training and becoming stronger. She would attend missions and work with others, but would often times not bond with them. Just complete the mission. The village also hired Shizuku for a lot of private missions that involved the assassination of the traitors in the village or people who opposed the village in general. During this time, Shizuku became even more advance in her skills at puppetry and fuuinjutsu, becoming almost a legend to others in the village in these fields.

Currently: Shizuku is currently a special jounin in the village, a rank she gained after doing so many missions for the village. She is seen as a killing machine to the village, although she has lately developed her own hate towards the village and boredom. She often times thinks of abandoning the village but doesn't wish to do so without gaining everything she can from the village. She currently works quietly as a pawn for the village, although she has her motives that she has yet to reveal.

RP Sample: Shizuku would continue to dash through the woods, from branch to branch as the moon light struck her face as it broke through the higher branches. Behind her were four shadow figures that stayed on her tail, she was being followed. As she tried to gain distance between them, she would reach for a scroll that she carried on her hip. While dashing, she released the scrolls contents which was a human sized puppet that resembled a woman with long blade hair and black cloak on, appearing as a large black mass. Shizuku would stop on a branch as the four figures did as well, about 15 feet away from her. "Give us the scroll!" Said one of the figures. Shizuku would laugh as chakra threads threads attached to the puppet. "Why don't you just attempt to take it from dear?" Shizuku questioned in a playful manner. This smart comment angered the foreign shinobi as he dashed at Shizuku, Shizuku would nod slightly thinking about how dumb this man was. This followed with the slight movement of her finger that opened the puppets mouth and released a intense flame swallowed the man hole and also lit up the area intensely. Shizuku would begin to chuckle slightly as she caushed the flame to spread on the tree's, causing a forest fire which stopped the others from coming at her as well. "I would love to play a bit more, but I must be going now." Shizuku claimed as she stopped the flaming from firing out of the puppet, although the forest fire continued and made her way out of the area. Leaving the others to be consumed by the flames.

Faceclaim: Rosso the Crimson from FF7 Franchise


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PostSubject: Re: Shizuku    Tue May 12, 2015 1:58 am

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PostSubject: Re: Shizuku    Tue May 12, 2015 2:56 am

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Ookay, first off. I realize this may be nitpicking/splitting hairs, but Hana's system is more akin to western military, not shinobi. Please change out the ninja terms/rankings for the appropriate equivalents. Bump when done.

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PostSubject: Re: Shizuku    Tue May 12, 2015 4:48 pm

One minor thing he didn't say, you're missing your name.

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