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PostSubject: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Mon May 04, 2015 9:23 pm

Event / Last Freebie:
 

Needs to be checked/approved:
 

Stat Training:
 

Element/Specialization Training:
 

Kodo's Jutsu:
 

Approved and Training:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Tue May 05, 2015 3:57 pm

Okay, lets clean this up a bit. Anything taken from the library is approved, so go ahead and move those over. When you've done that, I'll get to your customs.

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Tue May 05, 2015 4:19 pm

Done Jai

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Wed May 06, 2015 2:31 am


Name: Chi (き)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Maintainable (-5 per post)
Cooldown: Duration+5
Description: A very simple technique, the user simply shoots out spheres of chakra through their hands. These orbs move about 10 meters per second and burst upon impact, the damage being a minor bruise upon the area of impact. They are shot by reeling the hand back and shooting it forward in similar fashion to a palm strike.


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Name: Koran Family Technique:Raccoon's Claws (Koran Ichimon Gi:Araiguma no Tsume - コーランいちもん ぎ:アライグマ ノ ツメ)
   Canon/Custom: Custom
   Rank: C
   Type: Offensive
   Element: Doton
   Range: Self
   Specialty: Taijutsu
   Duration: Maintainable (-5 per post)
   Cooldown: Duration+5
   Description: A low-class technique developed by the Koran family, it is a simple taijutsu technique. The user simply does a handseal (unique to the technique), which then causes either earth from the ground to attack itself and mold are the fingers of each hand into the shape of claws, or for their own chakra to create the earth itself. These claws are about two inches in length and can cut/pierce a inch into exposed flesh. They do not increase punching power at all, simply giving the user another means to attack.


From what this sounds like, this is more of a ninjutsu technique rather than Taijutsu. Please fix the wording to clarify this.
   
Name: Dakorienga Family Technique:Wolf's Nose (Dakorienga Ichimon Gi:Ōkami no hana - ダコリエンガンいちもん ぎ:狼の鼻)
   Canon/Custom: Custom
   Rank: C
   Type: Supplementry
   Element: N/A
   Range: 10 Meter Radius
   Specialty: Taijutsu
   Duration: 3 Posts
   Cooldown: 6 Posts
   Description: A low-class technique developed by the Dakorienga family, it is a simple taijutsu technique. The user uses chakra to strengthen the muscles in their nose, allowing them to distinguish the smells of individuals, even hiding ones, within a 10 meter radius. The downside is the user must have smelled the opponent, by normal means or by using this jutsu up close, for them to smell their unique, individual smell.


Your description of this is incorrect. Its not the muscules that are strengthened, but the smell receptors that are. Please adjust accordingly.
   
Name: Koran Family Technique:Genbu (Koran Ichimon Gi:Genbu- コーランいちもん ぎ:玄武)
   Canon/Custom: Custom
   Rank: B
   Type: Defensive
   Element: Doton
   Range: Self
   Specialty: Taijutsu
   Duration: Maintainable (-15 per post)
   Cooldown: Duration+5
   Description: A middle-class technique developed by the Koran family, it is a simple taijutsu technique. The user uses doton chakra harden their arms orlegs immensely, to the point any basic taijutsu strike below A-Rank does nothing. While this does not increase their striking power, it greatly increases their defensive capabilites. Weapons at A-Rank do half their damage, B-Rank does nothing at all, and any weapon thats two ranks below the rank of user can be easily broken by the user. While a impressive defense, it only effects either both arms, both legs, or one arm and one leg, rendering the rest of the user not covered defenseless. It should also be noted that they cannot "switch" limbs when using this. If you use start out using this with your arms, you keep using it with your arms until you cancel it and wait off the cooldown.


This is way too much like the Earth Spear technique, which is S rank ninjutsu. You're either going to have to bump the rank [And the damage/blocking values] of it up the S-rank ninjutsu version to match, or learn ninjutsu and train the ninjutsu version.

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Wed May 06, 2015 11:23 pm

Fixed Claws and Nose.

In regards to what you said about Genbu: I remember variations being a thing before, Jai. People can do them and I feel that it makes more sense that I can do them as well as I am only limited to Taijutsu. I felt it made more sense to get one's freebies done before training for a new specialization and I feel that I can't bump it up because I personally believe it is unfair to jump from a B rank freebie to an S rank, especially since I haven't the money to train one. Do you mind discussing it over with me on Skype or something else of the sort?

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Thu May 07, 2015 10:57 pm

I somewhat nerfed and balanced it in-terms of what it can do as well.

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Mon May 11, 2015 11:26 pm

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C-Rank:
 

Claw and nose approved. We can discuss the last one over skype when you have time

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Tue May 12, 2015 9:22 pm

changed it to a library jutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Mon May 18, 2015 7:20 pm

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B-Rank:
 

Approved

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Wed May 20, 2015 4:14 pm

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Name: Koran Family Technique: Demon Fist (Koran Ichimon Gi:Majinken - コーランいちもん ぎ:魔人拳
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Description: A high-class yet simple technique made by the Koran family, the user simply focuses a very large amount chakra in their fist and forearm before releasing it in a physical strike. The chakra greatly enhances their physical strength, allowing them to easily shatter bones upon the area of impact as well as internal damage. A downside of this technique however is that it needs a about 4 seconds to charge up, which can be easily noticed as chakra radiates from the arm in a aura of blue. However, blood members of the Koran or Dakorienga families have their chakra turn a dark, menacing purple when they do it, possibly due to their demonic blood (this is a completely aesthetic effect and has no impact on the technique what so ever).

If it has a 'charge' time, then list the duration as 1 post, not instant. How much damage are we talking about here?

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Wed May 20, 2015 4:19 pm

Demon Fist approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Sun Jun 14, 2015 4:05 pm

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Name: Feel of the Underworld (Ankoku-gai no kanji - 暗黒街の感じ)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration:/
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Description: A taijutsu variation of Glimpse of the Heavens kenjutsu technique, its name references to those who have had visions of Hell, especially those who state how they can feel the evil energy given off it. Following the same principle as the original technique, the user lets their chakra loose in a single instantance in one limb (arm or leg) and attacks and then gets back in their fighting stance in the same instant hitting the target with maximum speed, power, and accuracy. This can effortlessly punch clean holes in opponents or knock off limbs. It's even powerful enough to punch through enemy armor.

Name: Cross Block (Kōsa - 交差法)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: With this technique, the user is able to intercept and counter an oncoming taijutsu technique by raising the knee, and driving the elbow downwards at the same time. This catches the attacking limb between his two limbs, and drives the elbow down with great force, effectively shattering the bone.

Name: Afterimage Technique (Zanzō no Jutsu, 残像の術)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: -20 chakra per post
Cooldown: Duration + 4
Description: The Afterimage Technique (残像の術, Zanzō no Jutsu) is a technique that allows one to move so swiftly that they leave behind a distinct afterimage of their person behind so as to trick an opponent into thinking they have not moved from their original position. The image itself cannot move as it fades through everything that moves toward it. In most cases, it is used to dodge an incoming attack and get behind the opponent to perform a counterattack, but it isn't limited to just that as it can also be used to confuse enemies. It can be used to distract the enemy, giving the user a chance to perform the actual attack.

Name: Leaf Dragon God (Konoha Ryūjin - 木ノ葉龍神)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: 40 meters
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: -30 chakra per post
Cooldown: Duration + 6
Description: This is the ultimate taijutsu technique created by a legendary taijutsu master. It appears to be initiated by an upward spin kick at which point it quickly becomes a tornado. Forming into a dragon with long whiskers, it attacks the target aiming to swallow them, at which point they are cut by the razor sharp winds inside the attack. After initiating the attack, the user appears to remain shielded within the base of the tornado as the outward surface of the dragon seems to be solid enough for a person to impact and rebound off of, making the only way to enter the technique once it has been initiated is by being swallowed. However, there is one distinct weakness to the technique. Since the Dragon God's true form is that of an ordinary tornado, its attack power is based on rotation. If one enters the attack's centre (Dragon's Eye) while rotating at high speed it can be dispersed without inflicting damage.

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Stat training approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:17 pm

Zaiaku wrote:
Approved and Training:
 

Needs to be checked/approved:
 

EVENT PRIZES

-10 Stats

-2 Specialization/Element Rank-ups

-D-rank Raiton

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I'll put 4 Stats to Speed and Endurance to get them to B-3 (Total of 8 stats) and use the remaining 2 on Reaction to get it to C-3

I use one rank-up as a Specialization Rank-up to get my ninjutsu from C-Rank to B-Rank (once its d to c training is approved) while using the other as a Element Rank-up to get my Raiton to C-Rank



Stat Training:
 

All approved, everything updated. Enjoy~

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Tue Jul 14, 2015 10:02 am

Zaiaku wrote:
Freebie Kage Jutsu:
 

Needs to be checked/approved:
 

Stat Training:
 

Element/Specialization Training:
 

Kodo's Jutsu:
 

Approved and Training:
 

Everything is approved, save for Earth Release: Thousand Toothed Black Shark (Doton: Senba-tsuki Kurosame - 土遁・千歯付き黒鮫). This a doton technique -- it will ALWAYS have a weakness to Raiton. Please adjust accordingly.

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Tue Jul 14, 2015 10:32 am

Edited Jai

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Sat Jul 18, 2015 11:01 pm

Zaiaku wrote:
Freebie Kage Jutsu:
 

Approved

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Mon Jul 20, 2015 11:30 am

Zaiaku wrote:
Event / Last Freebie:
 

Needs to be checked/approved:
 

Stat Training:
 

Element/Specialization Training:
 

Kodo's Jutsu:
 

Approved and Training:
 

Demonic Piercing Light Murder Gun: Please remove the reference that thoes with B rank or lower Raiton can still use this ability as long as they prep for one post. We don't allow people to use jutsu without having the elements and specs to use it: so A Raiton / Ninjutsu or higher in this case.

Fire Release: Armor: You need to stat how much the users speed or strength is increased. B rank jutsu can only increase a single stat +1 tier (So let's say from A-0 to A-1). An A rank jutsu can only increase by 2.

Lightning Release:Thunder God's Touch: You mention that this works for only 1 post against people of equal rank: is this equal rank of your character or equal rank of the jutsu?

All other jutsu are approved.

Speed, Strength, and Endurance have been increased as you specified.

Kishin (Fierce God/Demon God – 鬼神): I'm going to leave this for Jai to look at – I'm not entirely sure what all we're allowing for SS rank yet.

Medical Ninjutsu training, and training to C rank is approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Mon Jul 20, 2015 11:47 am

Demonic Piercing Light Murder Gun: Removed what you asked

Fire Release: Armor: Added in details

Lightning Release: Equal rank or 1 rank above the jutsu (as says the Stat Guide when it comes to Stunning)

Also, I asked for 2 in Spd, 2 in Rea, and 1 in Endurance. Can you please take the 2 out of Strength and put it in Reaction

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Mon Aug 03, 2015 6:15 pm

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  • Demonic Piercing Light Murder Gun – Please resize your image so that it’s not as large. I'm a little curious about how long it lasts. Also, can move or be directed in any form? Or does it remain a straight shot?
  • Fire Release: Armor – You need to choose one stat to be increased by +2, or clarify how the user chooses whether it is their speed or strength that is increased. It can’t be both at the same time.
  • Thunger God’s Touch – APPROVED.  
  • Kishin will not be modded until you meet the requirements for an SS rank jutsu.

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Mon Aug 03, 2015 6:31 pm

Edited Fire Armor and resized special beam cannon's pic.

Demonic Piercing Light Murder Gun – Please resize your image so that it’s not as large. I'm a little curious about how long it lasts. Also, can move or be directed in any form? Or does it remain a straight shot?

It only lasts a few seconds, stopping and fading away once it reaches its range limit   (20 meters) or hits something it can't penetrate (A-Rank wind defensive jutsu for example). It's a straight shot.

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Mon Aug 03, 2015 6:40 pm

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  • Demonic Piercing Light Murder Gun - APPROVED.
  • Fire Release: Armor - Sorry about this. I missed this before. How high level are we talking for the Water techs that can be blocked?

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PostSubject: Re: Zaiaku Koran [Jutsu Registry]   Mon Aug 03, 2015 6:45 pm

Fire Release: Armor - APPROVED.

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