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PostSubject: Re: Luke Yasenha Jutsu registry    Thu Dec 03, 2015 9:09 pm

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Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten charka to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training).

This MUST have a cooldown. You can leave the Duration as / or make it 1 post, it means basically the same thing, but this must have a cooldown. Because this is scaling, you need to know that it's going to cost 1 token per rank that it covers (1D, 1C, 1B, 1A), or else you'll need to just wait and train it for the A-rank WC. Which isn't much. Beyond that, set a speed for the movement between the shadows.


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Name: Embodiment of Darkness Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive/Denfensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short to medium range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Indefinitely until charka runs our or deactivated
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: This is Luke's go to jutsu when using his shadow style; Luke can manifest either eight tentacles (four on each side) or four, large additional shadow arms that float with two floating either side of his shoulders and two floating just under his own arms, his tentacles can be used to wrap around opponents, used as whips or like ropes for other uses while the arms can grab and attack using strong punches. the additional tentacles/arms can be cut off like regular body parts, although their skin is armored with dragon-like scales, they can be cut through, given a fast and hard cut to it, Although Luke can reform them but not instantly. each arm/tentacle lasts for about six posts, Reform takes two posts per part cut off/destroyed. Takes ten charka to manifest, five to repair plus five each post active and if not enough charka is available, the shadow arms/tentacles will fade away by themselves.

In the Duration, you need to format it as -X chakra per post, where X is the drain amount. D-rank Drain is -5 chakra per post. You need to give the defensive power of this jutsu, as well what offensive boosts it offers. The cooldown needs to either be higher, or changed to be Duration + X ; which is the normal cooldown format for jutsu with a chakra drain duration. The X can be 3 or higher for this jutsu.


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Name: Shadow Strike Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Unlimited until deactivation or broken
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Using his shadows, he coats his blade in the shadows and forms them into a black steel that fits from the end of his blade and extents it to three times its size from two feet to six. It coats the bottom as well, giving the whole blade a black gloss finish like obsidian, yet as strong as the steel the blade is made from. However, it can be broken by a strong enough strike or by Jutsus of B-Rank and above. Its only purpose is to increase the length of Luke's blade and has no other abilities besides that. Requires 10 charka to form.

This would actually just be basic Kenjutsu, since all it does is affect the blade. You won't get that much length change from a D-rank; more like 1ft (.3m) addition versus tripling. Otherwise, it's fine.

So you know for later, if it's channeled through the blade only, it's straight Kenjutsu. If it effects the body/AoE, then it needs Kenjutsu || Ninjutsu for specialty.

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PostSubject: Re: Luke Yasenha Jutsu registry    Thu Dec 03, 2015 9:46 pm

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Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 1 post
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten charka to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training). While, depending on the distance, you can walk or run to the shadow your looking for; once you find a shadow, it pulls you up and out in a few seconds, allowing the user to travel vast distances in seemingly little time at all.

I need an actual, physical speed. You're going to need more of a cooldown; depending on the speed you give me, I can tell you what kind of cooldown you need.

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Special Jounin: 7D, 4C, 1B (20 Total)

Stat points: 5 to speed, 3 to strength and 2 to reaction time

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Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 1 post
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten charka to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training). While, depending on the distance, you can walk or run to the shadow your looking for; once you find a shadow, it pulls you up and out in a few seconds, allowing the user to travel vast distances in seemingly little time at all.

Name: Embodiment of Darkness Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive/Denfensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short to medium range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -10 charka per post active (ends when deactivated or user doesn't have enough charka to sustain it)
Cooldown: Equal to the amount of posts active for.
Description: This is Luke's go to jutsu when using his shadow style; Luke can manifest either eight tentacles (four on each side) or four, large additional shadow arms that float with two floating either side of his shoulders and two floating just under his own arms, his tentacles can be used to wrap around opponents, used as whips or like ropes for other uses while the arms can grab and attack using strong punches (Strengh equal to C3-B in strength). the additional tentacles/arms can be cut off like regular body parts, although their skin is armored with dragon-like scales, giving a C2 in endurance, they can be cut through, given a fast and hard cut to it or by a jutsu at C-rank or above. Although Luke can reform them but not instantly. each arm/tentacle lasts for about six posts, Reform takes two posts per part cut off/destroyed. Takes ten charka to manifest, five to repair plus five each post active and if not enough charka is available, the shadow arms/tentacles will fade away by themselves.

At the MOST, you can boost by +1 tier at D-rank. You need to list the cooldown how I told you before. Duration + X, or else set a static cooldown, but if you set a static, it is going to be fairly long; at LEAST 5 posts.

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Name: Shadow Strike Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to B (D equal to one foot to B equal to 4 feet extention)
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Unlimited until deactivation or broken
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Using his shadows, he coats his blade in the shadows and forms them into a black steel that fits from the end of his blade and extents it to three times its size from two feet to six. It coats the bottom as well, giving the whole blade a black gloss finish like obsidian, yet as strong as the steel the blade is made from. However, it can be broken by a strong enough strike or by Jutsus of B-Rank and above. Its only purpose is to increase the length of Luke's blade and has no other abilities besides that. Requires 10 charka to form.

You made none of the changes I asked for here. See above, because this is scaling, it going to cost 1 token for each rank (1D, 1C, 1B)

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PostSubject: Re: Luke Yasenha Jutsu registry    Fri Dec 04, 2015 5:18 pm

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Name: Substitution Jutsu (Kawarimi no Jutsu - 変わり身の術)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: /
Specialty: /
Duration: /
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: With this technique, users replace their own body with some other object, generally with a block of wood, the moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to attack or flee from the battlefield. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. It's a basic ninjutsu even taught at the Academy, but it's a useful art that can be applied in variety of situations, as it allows for a swift getaway from danger.

I must have missed this yesterday. Approved.

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Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten chakra to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training). While within the shadow dimension, you can move at 12m/s; once you find a shadow, it pulls you up and out in a few seconds, allowing the user to travel vast distances in seemingly little time at all.

Approved.

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Special Jounin: 6D(20 Total)

Stat points: 5 to speed, 3 to strength and 2 to reaction time

Name: Substitution Jutsu (Kawarimi no Jutsu - 変わり身の術)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: /
Specialty: /
Duration: /
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: With this technique, users replace their own body with some other object, generally with a block of wood, the moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to attack or flee from the battlefield. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. It's a basic ninjutsu even taught at the Academy, but it's a useful art that can be applied in variety of situations, as it allows for a swift getaway from danger.

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Name: Shadow Style: Shadow Teleportation Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D to A (Currently at D rank)
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Element: Shadow
Range: D-Rank: Ten meters, C-Rank: Fifteen meters, B-Rank: Twenty meters and A-Rank: Twenty-five meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seal: Rat
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: A technique usable only by those possessing Shadow seal within them; Granting them to enter any shadow, regardless of how dim it is, as long as it is casting a shadow and allows access to the shadow dimension; a world of pure darkness that is connected to every shadow cast. The user can pick any shadow and appear out of it as they can see out to where or who that shadow is connected to, allowing the choice, but it is limited and isn't instant teleportation as the user has to find the correct shadow to come out from. But this ability is mainly for getting around or avoiding attacks and repositioning to get a better angle of attack. Current requires ten chakra to use to get in and out of the shadow world (will change over time with training). While within the shadow dimension, you can move at 12m/s; once you find a shadow, it pulls you up and out in a few seconds, allowing the user to travel vast distances in seemingly little time at all.

Name: Embodiment of Darkness Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive/Denfensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short to medium range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -10 chakra per post active (ends when deactivated or user doesn't have enough charka to sustain it)
Cooldown: Six posts cool down
Description: This is Luke's go to jutsu when using his shadow style; Luke can manifest either eight tentacles (four on each side) or four, large additional shadow arms that float with two floating either side of his shoulders and two floating just under his own arms, his tentacles can be used to wrap around opponents, used as whips or like ropes for other uses while the arms can grab and attack using strong punches (Strength equal to D3 in strength). the additional tentacles/arms can be cut off like regular body parts, although their skin is armoured with dragon-like scales, giving a D3 in endurance, they can be cut through, given a fast and hard cut to it or by a jutsu at C-rank or above. Although Luke can reform them but not instantly. each arm/tentacle lasts for about six posts, Reform takes two posts per part cut off/destroyed. Takes ten chakra to manifest, five to repair plus ten each post active and if not enough chakra is available, the shadow arms/tentacles will fade away by themselves.

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Name: Masamune of the Dark God Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Element: Shadow
Range: Short
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Unlimited until deactivation or broken
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Using his shadows, he coats his blade in the shadows and forms them into a black steel that fits from the end of his blade and extents it to three times its size from two feet to six. It coats the bottom as well, giving the whole blade a black gloss finish like obsidian, yet as strong as the steel the blade is made from. However, it can be broken by a strong enough strike or by Jutsus of B-Rank and above. Its only purpose is to increase the length of Luke's blade and has no other abilities besides that. Requires 10 chakra to form.

Again, read the chakra and jutsu guidelines. We have a set chakra cost for each rank of jutsu. B-rank is base 15. You can say a jutsu costs above base; that's a common way to get strong jutsu approved at a lower rank when they skirt the line between ranks (Say a jutsu that would be stupidly powerful at A-rank with normal chakra cost would get approved if you bump it from 25 to 40 chakra to use, sometimes). Otherwise, this would be fine.


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Name: Secret Sword: Moon Shadow (Hiken: Tsukikage - 秘剣・月影)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user rushes to their opponent with great speed before leaping towards and attacking them with a vertical sword strike, leaving a trace of afterimage in the process.

Name: Infinite Slash Combo (Surasshu no mugen konbo - スラッシュの無限コンボ)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Infinite Slash Combo (スラッシュの無限コンボ, Surasshu no mugen konbo) is an attack where the user dashes to the opponent at a blinding speed and slashes at them with a blade quickly. Depending on how much the user infuses their chakra into the attack, more than one slash can be done and the distance can increase.

Approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Luke Yasenha Jutsu registry    Fri Dec 04, 2015 5:32 pm

This, This is your best friend. I know it's a bit complicated, because of the sheer volume of information (and the lack of some, but that's on another admin who keeps being lazy and not finishing his sections. ee;;), but it does give you what you need to know.

http://ninjaballad.forumotion.com/t74-stat-system

Seriously. Read it. It does tell you what you need to know about a lot of this.

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Stat points: 5 to speed, 3 to strength and 2 to reaction time

5 points in speed would be:

E-C0 [5]

3 points strength:

E-D2 [3]

2 to reaction time:

E-D1 [2]

So what I need you to do is, repost the stat request as follows

E-C0 [5]
E-D2 [3]
E-D1 [2]


All stat requests are formatted that way. This is why the number of tiers is counted in the first post, so that it's easier to figure out how many you're spending to get to each point. It takes twenty points to hit SS3 in one stat.

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PostSubject: Re: Luke Yasenha Jutsu registry    Sun Dec 06, 2015 10:03 pm

Oookay, we seem to have some issues with the word counts here. You're stating you trained Ninjutsu from D rank to B rank and stated your word count at 3,542 words. As per our guidelines you are way off of the required words:

D-C 2,000 words
C-B 3,000 words

You need a total of 5,000 words to take your Ninjutsu from D to B rank. Training Guidelines Here.

Furthermore; it has been brought to my attention that your character approval was revoked until specific changes have been made to your character app. Until your character is reapproved you cannot RP, do missions, or do any more training: nor will the rest of your stuff be modded until the character issue is fixed.

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